I thought we left this back in the 1950's. Next time, try to use this proposal for a commentary on American education rather than something that would make Shirtbusters blush.

The animation is well-done and creative, but it feels like plotless torture porn. It should have had a plot, to be honest.

This is like an Eastern version of Happy Tree Friends, with a more developed plot. The pacing feels a bit too slow at times, though.

One of your better works as Anna looks good in here in a cartoony and funny way, really well-drawn (in my opinion your more cartoony/abstract/surreal drawings are your best ones), however my critiques on the coloring/shading still apply (it looks muddy and needs referencing, it's better if you use more saturated shades for the shading [not with black or with darker shades] with a lower opacity)

I see how you like drawing and art. However, I think you need to work more on the anatomy to then break the rules. Try to use references and apps for them. You can also work a bit more on the shading to see where the light is coming from (if it's coming from the front, back or side) and make sure it's suggested, not necessarily visible. Try to study some drawing methods such as the Loomis one to then work on your more cartoonlike art style.

I feel nostalgic. While your style is not the best (the shading needs some work, it looks muddy; the anatomy also needs to be improved, the lineart also feels a bit wonky) you do have potential. Now that I'm rewatching some shows from my childhood, including Save-Ums, a quote from Foo stuck in me.

"Foo doesn't believe in monsters. Foo believes in friends."